I didnt make 2 different versions, I just went back and caught myself if it got too heated and changed it so it wasnt too graphic so not to offend anyone on any groups. Believe me, I can write very descriptive pieces haha. if you like lord of the rings and charmed I can point you to my stories, those are def NC-17 rating.
--- On Wed, 6/10/09, Juliana Curtis <lionluvsthelamb@gmail.com> wrote:
From: Juliana Curtis <lionluvsthelamb@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: LM note: Re: [BellaAndEdward] Guilty Pleasures (Rated M sex situations,) Bella/Edward
To: BellaAndEdward@yahoogroups.com
Date: Wednesday, June 10, 2009, 9:01 AM
Sweeetttt and hey will u send the NON-toned down piece to breaking all the rules...or atleast me....pretty please with naked cullen boys on top...tehehehehe. ...ooh and I will email u privately abt writing later
today :-)
On 6/10/09, Donna Yontz <latina44870@yahoo.com> wrote:
>
> I actually toned that piece down lol. I'm so used to writing for my adult
> lord of the rings group and we love smut there haha. So I tried to keep it
> just toned down enough so as not to offend anyone who isnt into smut.
>
> As for helping you write something, I'd love to. I've co written many pieces
> with people in other fandoms. I'm just getting my feet wet so to speak in
> the twilight world but I have many ideas. If you wanna try and do something
> together, email me and let's talk about it =o)
>
> Donna
>
> --- On Wed, 6/10/09, Juliana Curtis <lionluvsthelamb@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>
> From: Juliana Curtis <lionluvsthelamb@gmail.com>
> Subject: LM note: Re: [BellaAndEdward] Guilty Pleasures (Rated M sex
> situations,) Bella/Edward
> To: BellaAndEdward@yahoogroups.com
> Date: Wednesday, June 10, 2009, 12:19 AM
>
>
> Hey guys list mommy/owner here...in response to the last review if the
> rating is m and ur not 18+ don't read it...and if u r 18+ and its not
> your thing....don't read it.... So basically u don't have to read a fic
> if its over ur age lvl or not ur thing...and please if you don't have
> anything nice or atleast constructive to say please don't say anything
> at all....ok I am done channeling my inner mommy......
>
> I LOVED it again btw....u rock my socks baby...I might recruit you in
> helping me write a fic cuz well I really want to but am bein a total
> wuss... Kk love u all
>
> <3 your list mommy aka list owner
>
> On 6/9/09, Donna Yontz <latina44870@yahoo.com> wrote:
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>> ummm... ok...
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>> --- On Tue, 6/9/09, Brenda Williams <blaw_yall@yahoo.com> wrote:
>>
>>
>> From: Brenda Williams <blaw_yall@yahoo.com>
>> Subject: Re: [BellaAndEdward] Guilty Pleasures (Rated M sex situations,)
>> Bella/Edward
>> To: BellaAndEdward@yahoogroups.com
>> Date: Tuesday, June 9, 2009, 5:13 PM
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>> um...i didnt read the whole thing, but its only because the rating and
>> situation is kinda grose....... well IF i liked the situation i would have
>> read it and liked it but i dont and didnt so yeah
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>> From: Donna <latina44870@ yahoo.com>
>> To: BellaAndEdward@ yahoogroups. com
>> Sent: Monday, June 8, 2009 1:47:57 PM
>> Subject: [BellaAndEdward] Guilty Pleasures (Rated M sex situations,)
>> Bella/Edward
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>>
>> Title: Guilty Pleasures
>> Author: Latina44870
>> Genre: Twilight Series
>> Rating: M (mature)
>> Warnings: sexual situations
>> Pairings: Edward/Bella
>> Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters. All of them are owned by
>> the amazing writer, Stephenie Meyer and I am only playing with them for my
>> own amusement and hopefully… yours.
>> Summary: Edward and Bella. Two people madly in love yet denied true
>> satisfaction. Edward longs to take Bella in his arms and make love to her,
>> yet he knows how dangerous it would be for her. Could he possibly be
>> gentle
>> enough to risk showing her just how much he loved her?
>>
>> He watched her intensely as she sat in the moonlight. The slight breeze
>> stirred just enough to make sure that he was aware of just how wonderful
>> she
>> smelled.. They had come to their favorite spot, the meadow; the first
>> place
>> where she had guessed his darkest secret. The one thing he had to hide
>> from
>> practically everyone else in the world; except her. She was his exception
>> to
>> just about every rule he had, every rule he had already broken just by
>> knowing her as well as he did. Bella. Just the name sounded incredibly
>> desirable to him. He lusted for her in every way possible. In every way
>> that
>> a man could want a woman and then in ways that were not *normal*. Normal,
>> to
>> a human anyways, but not weird in anyway for one of his kind. He was a
>> vampire. A bloodsucker, who had no right to take even the slightest
>> liberties with this girl; yet he could not leave her. Although incredibly
>> strong, he had not the inner strength walk away, even if it was for her
>> own
>> well
>> being.
>>
>> Bella turned to look at him, undoubtedly feeling his intense gaze. "What?"
>> she asked with a slightly nervous laugh.
>>
>> Edward smiled and shook his head, "Nothing. I was just admiring you in the
>> moonlight."
>>
>> They were silent after that; each lost in their own thoughts. Several
>> minutes passed, and it was Bella who finally broke the silence. "I love
>> you."
>>
>> He remained silent, almost as if he had not heard her words, even though
>> he
>> had. The three words meant so much to him, yet he wished she had never
>> said
>> them. "Bella," he began, but she moved quickly and turned to him, putting
>> her finger to his cold lips.
>>
>> "Shhh," she said as she leaned down to remove her finger, placing her warm
>> lips gently against his. "I love you Edward, and nothing you say is going
>> to
>> change that. You can tell me how wrong it is. You can say it isn't
>> possible.
>> That means nothing to me. All I know is how I feel when I am with you;
>> when
>> I think of you."
>>
>> She placed her lips back on his and he let it happen. He felt the warmth
>> of
>> her skin as she settled herself closer to his body. He felt her tongue
>> trace
>> across his lips and he had to struggle to not part them. Instead of
>> continuing the delicious torture, he turned his head and broke their
>> kiss..
>> He heard her sigh out of frustration and his heart hurt, knowing he had
>> caused her upset. She just didn't understand. If he lost control it would
>> be
>> deadly for her.
>>
>>
>> "Bella," he began, searching for just the right words to say, "You know I
>> love you too and I am only thinking of what is best for you. I do not want
>> to hurt you."
>>
>> "Why don't you let me decide that? Maybe I want to take that chance with
>> you." She reached up and wiped a tear from her eye as she waited for his
>> response. "Make love to me Edward, please?"
>>
>> Her words were his breaking point. He wanted her. So bad in fact that his
>> body was screaming out for her. In one quick motion he scooped her up into
>> his arms and moved their bodies together. "Bella," he breathed as he lost
>> himself in her lips. They were soft and inviting. He pushed his tongue
>> past
>> their warmth and into her mouth, playfully meeting her own. "I need you,"
>> he
>> moaned as his hands began to caress her shoulder. She had way too many
>> clothes on for his liking and he began to unbutton the shirt she was
>> wearing.
>>
>> "Yes," Bella gasped. She wrapped her arms around his shoulders and ran her
>> fingers through his hair. "I'm yours."
>>
>> He silently cursed himself for even contemplating what he was going to do
>> but he pushed those thoughts aside. He would have her. He would make her
>> his
>> for all eternity.. Nothing would ever keep them apart after tonight. Her
>> shirt slid from her arms and dropped with a whisper to the soft grass
>> below
>> them. He was pleasantly surprised that she wore no bra and her small but
>> perfect breasts practically glowed in the moonlight. Her nipples stood
>> erectly, although he did not know if it was from her arousal or from the
>> chill in the night air. "You're so beautiful," he whispered as he reached
>> up
>> to gently caress a soft nub with his hand.
>>
>> Bella gasped at the feeling of his hand on her breast, though not from the
>> chill of his skin but from the fire that was burning within her. She
>> wanted
>> this more than even her next breath. She closed her eyes and moaned as he
>> lowered his mouth to her breast, his tongue swirling around the tender
>> skin.. Bella pulled at his shirt until he helped take it off and she could
>> not help but admire the flawless pale skin.
>>
>> "Are you sure?" Edward asked one more time, and Bella answered him by
>> reaching for the button of her jeans. He watched her, amused at her
>> eagerness as she slid them down to reveal a simple pair of black bikini
>> underpants. Her slim body accented with slight curves in all the right
>> places was on display for his eyes and he drank in every inch of it before
>> reaching for her.
>> Bella molded her nearly naked body against his as he slowly slid her onto
>> the blanket they had brought with them. She wrapped her legs around his
>> still clothed waist and welcomed the onslaught of his kisses on her needy
>> lips. Bella was so lost in his kisses she was unaware of when he too had
>> taken off his pants. A shiver went through her body as the only thing
>> between them no was her tiny black pair of underwear.
>>
>> Edward felt her shiver and began to back off, "No!" Bella cried out, "I
>> want
>> this Edward."
>>
>> It was the truth. She did want him. He had not asked and she had not given
>> him the information that she had never been with a man before. She was
>> still
>> a virgin at 17. In a way she was glad that she had waited for Edward. She
>> had never in her life felt so much love for anyone. Sure she loved her
>> parents but this was a different love. This love consumed her very soul.
>>
>> She was well aware of Edward's hands as they roamed her body, feeling and
>> caressing every inch. His lips trailed their way along her chin and down
>> along her neck, "Are you afraid?" he chucked in her ear.
>>
>> "No," she managed to choke out, not knowing what to expect. Would he bite
>> her? Would he turn her into a vampire tonight? Make her his mate forever?
>>
>> Edward returned his lips to her neck, nipping slightly; well aware of the
>> danger he was initiating. He could literally feel the sweet warm blood
>> pulsating through her jugular. He held her body easily with one arm while
>> he
>> used his other hand to carefully ease her panties down her legs. He had
>> them
>> off in an instant and looked deeply into her eyes. Nothing was between
>> them.
>> "I love you Bella and if this is what you want, then I shall make you
>> mine.."
>>
>> Bella nodded as she lifted her hips slightly into his, urging him on. He
>> returned his attentions to her body, well aware of the effect he was
>> having
>> on her due to the way she was gripping his back with her fingernails. "If
>> you are not careful love, you may be the one to draw blood first."
>>
>> Bella giggled at his words and mumbled, "Sorry." He silenced her again
>> with
>> his kisses and settled himself at her core. She was wet and was
>> undoubtedly
>> ready for him. Edward slipped slowly and easily inside of her. Bella
>> gasped
>> at the slight shot of pain which was quickly replaced by the feeling of
>> having Edward finally inside of her. All the long months of waiting, she
>> could hardly believe this night had finally come.
>>
>> They moved together in building intensity. Moans turned to gasps as edges
>> quickly peaked. Bella had never in her wildest dreams imagined such
>> intense
>> pleasure had ever existed. She felt their two bodies mesh as one, her
>> heart
>> consumed by his very being. She was hardly aware that his lips had
>> returned
>> to her neck and his nibbles had turned to nipping. She felt his teeth on
>> her
>> tender skin and realized he was feeding on her blood. It didn't hurt and
>> she
>> was surprised to see it was actually enhanced by their lovemaking. Even if
>> he could not stop in time, it was a good way to die. To die in his arms,
>> their bodies intertwined until she took her last breath. What a way to
>> go..
>> Bella felt herself drifting in and out of the most heavenly dream. Such
>> pleasure had never been known to her before; bliss that seemed never
>> ending.
>> Her eyes slowly began closing. "Edward," she said, her voice nothing more
>> than a whisper.
>>
>> He heard her voice through his feeding frenzy. His ice cold body was now
>> warmed from drinking her blood. He knew he had to stop or she would die.
>> Against every carnal urge of a vampire, Edward broke the lock he had on
>> her
>> neck and moved out and away from her body. "Give me a moment," he said
>> quickly before she could protest, but Bella just laid there looking at
>> him,
>> still recovering herself.
>>
>> He returned to her, gazing down at her naked body. "Bella?"
>>
>> "Edward," she gasped as she took a deep breath. "My body feels like it is
>> on
>> fire."
>>
>> "That is the venom going through your veins Bella. I have taken your body
>> and made it mine for all eternity, just as you had asked me to."
>>
>> Bella felt her body convulse with pain. "It hurts," she cried as Edward
>> scooped her up into his arms. Only moments before she had been flying high
>> with such pleasure and now agonizing pain.
>>
>> "Shhh," he said as he cradled her in his lap. "It will only hurt for a
>> little while and then you will be reborn a vampire Bella. I will be right
>> here when it is over." He held her and each time she cried out from the
>> pain
>> it nearly drove him mad with grief. He knew seeing her change would be
>> hard
>> on him. He never wanted to hurt her. He just kept telling himself that
>> after
>> tonight she would never hurt again.
>>
>> Morning came and the sun rose over the meadow streaming it's golden rays
>> on
>> the two people who laid beneath the large tree. Edward held Bella. She had
>> stopped struggling and had accepted the pain. Her body had been still for
>> hours as it made the change. "Bella?"
>>
>> She heard him calling from somewhere in the darkness. "Edward?"
>>
>> He watched her shift slightly in his arms. Her eyelids fluttered a few
>> times
>> and then they opened. "Edward?"
>>
>> She saw the sun sparkling off of his beautiful pale skin. It was such a
>> beautiful sight she was speechless. He sat her up and waited for her to
>> say
>> something. When she didn't, he motioned to her own body. "Look at yourself
>> Bella."
>>
>> Puzzled she looked down at the tender skin of her belly. It sparkled like
>> diamonds in the bright morning sun. "Does this mean.."
>>
>> Edward laughed, "Yes Bella.. You and I will never be apart." He looked at
>> her eyes and could see the redness around them. "How do you feel?"
>>
>> She didn't feel any pain. Her throat felt a little dry but other than that
>> she was ok. "I could use some water," she admitted as she coughed, "but
>> other than that I'm fine."
>>
>> Edward laughed, "It isn't water that you need, Bella."
>>
>> It took her a moment before she realized. "Oh. Oohhhh!" she said, her eyes
>> growing big.. Now that she knew what it was she needed, the thirst became
>> fierce. "I think we need to hunt."
>>
>> He nodded and watched as she stood up and started to take off. "Bella?"
>>
>> She stopped and turned back to him. "What?"
>>
>> "I think perhaps we should get dressed first."
>>
>> She looked down at her naked body and blushed. Scrambling, she grabbed her
>> clothes and quickly dressed. Edward did the same with a smirk on his
>> beautiful face.
>>
>> "Don't worry Bella," he said as he pulled her to him and kissed her, "we
>> have all eternity to be naked together." With a laugh she took off running
>> and Edward followed.
>>
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> <3 Juliana
> Edwardian "Go Team Edward"
>
>
> For almost ninety years I've walked among my kind, and yours…
> all the time thinking I was complete in myself, not realizing what I
> was seeking.
> And not finding anything, because you weren't alive yet.
> Edward Cullen, Twilight, Chapter 14, p.304
>
> While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
> I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me.
> The Spill Canvas- Lullaby (Lyrics)
>
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<3 Juliana
Edwardian "Go Team Edward"
For almost ninety years I've walked among my kind, and yours…
all the time thinking I was complete in myself, not realizing what I
was seeking.
And not finding anything, because you weren't alive yet.
Edward Cullen, Twilight, Chapter 14, p.304
While you were sleeping I figured out everything,
I was constructed for you, and you were molded for me.
The Spill Canvas- Lullaby (Lyrics)
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